IELTSPrep
Task 2 Band 8.5

Task 2: Does Technology Make Us More Alone?

Question

Some people believe that modern communication technology brings people closer together, while others argue that it makes us more isolated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.

Model answer

Few inventions have changed daily life as quickly as the smartphone, and few have divided opinion so sharply. While some argue that constant connectivity deepens our isolation, I would contend that communication technology, used deliberately, brings people closer than ever before.

Those who see technology as isolating make a reasonable observation: time spent on a screen is often time not spent face to face. Commuters scroll through feeds rather than talk to neighbours, and family dinners compete with notifications. Psychologists have also linked heavy social media use to loneliness, since carefully curated posts invite unfavourable comparisons with our own unedited lives.

However, this view mistakes the tool for its misuse. The same devices allow grandparents to read bedtime stories to grandchildren on other continents, migrants to remain present in the lives of families they support from abroad, and people with rare illnesses to find communities that simply do not exist in their home towns. During recent global lockdowns, video calls were not a pale substitute for social life; for millions, they were its only remaining form.

In my view, technology amplifies the social habits we already have. Someone inclined to withdraw can certainly hide behind a screen, but someone who values relationships gains powerful new ways to maintain them. The question is therefore not whether we use communication technology, but whether we use it to replace human contact or to extend it. Used with intention, it is a bridge rather than a wall, and the evidence of connected families and communities suggests the bridge is the more common outcome.

How this answer scores
  • Address both views explicitly — one body paragraph each — before giving your opinion.
  • State your position clearly in the introduction and restate it in the conclusion.
  • Support each main idea with one developed example rather than several thin ones.
  • Signpost with linking devices: 'On the one hand', 'However', 'In my view'.